Hy Holiday's Plan

Assalamu'alaikum Wr. Wb.
Hello guys... Meet again with me in my fifth post.
I hope You and I always in good condition.
Bay the way Ramadhan will be end. I want to say "Taqabbalallahu Minna wa Minkum" and I want to apologize to you guys if I make mistakes, because there are no innocent human beings.

In my fifth post i want to tell about my holiday's plan. I hope you enjoy reading it.

My Holiday's Plan

When I will have graduated and worked later, I want to save some of my salaries so I can take my mother, father, little brother, aunt, and my unknown prospective husband to go to Mecca. I am going to invite my family  and relatives to be able to worship in Mecca and it has been my dream since I was a teenager It's blessing if the dream comes true. My second holiday's plan is if i will have  merried later, I plan to take a vacation with my unknown prospective husband to go to France. I want to see andd observe Eiffel Tower close to it. In France I will visited many places such as ; Louvre Museum, Place de la Concorde, Disneland Paris and many more.

Thank you for reading my post...
Wassalamu'alaikum Wr. Wb.


Komentar

  1. Pus, you got double "d" on "and"

    BalasHapus
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    1. Oh.. Thankyou for your correction Alma..

      Hapus
  2. Pus, you got typo in "merried" and "disneland".

    BalasHapus
  3. In France I will visited-VT- many places (will visit)

    BalasHapus
  4. hallo puspa.. if you consistent write "i" with "I", I think it must be better ^^

    BalasHapus
  5. Hey Puspa. Let me give my correction in opening sentences (greeting), you should write "by the way" not "bay the way" (Sp).


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    BalasHapus
  6. Maybe you can delete "will" on "when I will have graduated..."

    BalasHapus

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